The Last Captain has some pretty intense stuff coming up, and I'm wondering if I should actually write the male torturing a female scene out or gloss over it. I think it might build and develop the torturer quite a bit. We already know he's an evil fucker, but this might assist in developing the creep factor.
The torture victim is no saint, either. Indeed, she's quite the gold-digger, though she has her very legitimate reasons.
On the fence on this one, but I'm gonna write it anyway, just to get it out. I'l decide later on whether to keep it or not.
Just so you know, the novel is already rated R for the violence and language, if nothing else.
Any thoughts, readers? It would be helpful to have your feedback.
Thanks, in advance.